When We Part
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if i acclerate your heartbeat would you decelerate my rotation about your feet.
if i begged your velocity to slow all this down would our displacement be miles farther apart.
if i told you this nonsense is a link between astronomy and physics
late night studying for an ackward quiz
summarizing all of what i read no doubt this outcome is rather marvelous
tells you for a fact my minding is on focus 😉
but damn memorizing equations is a setback
these constellations in the sky are lighting this knowlegde
overflowing my revolution in the course of my orbit
neither physics nor astronomy can ruin my forecast 😉
creative dontcha think ;P
Bloo said,
September 12, 2006 @ 1:48 am
yes it is creative, and u don’t need to put (;p) to place some joke on it. really, it is creative, and u know it.
i know for a fact, u’ve started this piece on a spirit different than the one u ended it with.. nt to say it took u days.. or even hours.. it emphasises ur impatience, .. that way.. u start great.. and then u wanna enjoy that greatness so u rush to the end.
good work UB
Your Battlefield said,
September 13, 2006 @ 4:53 am
bloo:
🙂 yup your absolutely right my begining was great but i kinda ruined the end by ending it with rush…my eyes were longing to close and sleep for a few hours..
thank you ;p