Empty, you’re forbidden. (2)

May
8
2007
Posted at: 3:15 am
Filed under : Uncategorized

Inside me, you silently die. I am cold, torn apart. Forgotten – you move aside. I resume my dying.

On the cold ground exposed – I am inexistent. My breathing is false. My soul is demised. 

My eyes, they gave out. Weeping and scorning my flesh. Persist I care not to resist. I am – I am bare and distraught. Do not please, I am, I have already been deceased.

Resume breathing for me, I am end.

 

Life. Living. Dead.

2 Responses so far

  1. 1

    Raven said,

    May 8, 2007 @ 8:01 pm

    Excellent display of words if I do say so myself ^_^
    my favorite part is “Persist I care not to resist.”

    Beautiful!

  2. 2

    your battlefield said,

    May 8, 2007 @ 10:12 pm

    you’re too sweet for me to resist, thank you for your sweet and much appreciated feedback.

    its continuation to a previous piece.

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