It’s Killing Me
Posted at: 2:39 pm
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Tenatively, she looked into the eyes of her heart’s thief seeking a glint of emotion and words that just might hint endearance. Yet, all she could sense was their disregard. In it’s embrace, she found neglectness, in their spite she found pain. Why couldn’t they see the passion and affection she longed to set free.
Captured and bound in the chain of his stares, she saw her demise slowly. Those eyes, will never share the same interest thats killing and wounding her heart.Why’s this always the intermission of a never ending pain, torture and bitterness she’s always been acquainted with?
She stood feeling caged by this beast. Her desired captivator has no sense of her longing, denying her the release she needs… Not able to withstand this sorrow, she closed her bruised and sobbing eyes hoping to calm the racing heartbeat as she kneeled towards……..
To Be Continued…..
am going to be out of control for the next two days, thinking will not be another update for awhile or till i understand this….(—–)!?! 🙁 i wanted to post another doodle but ooooof not workin scan…..i guess it is “scanning life”. the picture above is beautiful, found it on the internet. :P. adios for awhile..don’t miss me too much ….hehehe 😀
The Stallion said,
April 8, 2006 @ 8:13 am
I don’t know what to say, but I have to ask where you got that picture from? It’s amazing! ;o)
Your Battlefield said,
April 8, 2006 @ 5:28 pm
say about what…my short story… as for where i got that picture…my secret will never be revealed 😛 hehehheheh hahahah i’m devious..just typed in google something and she appeared 😀 u lovie her dont u >?
The Stallion said,
April 9, 2006 @ 7:58 am
I do! *blush*
Vintage said,
April 9, 2006 @ 5:13 pm
descriptive .. i think what u do is sit, and think of many many ways to describe a feeling and write it down. which is a mazing, it could only be less than a sec. just a glimpse in the eyes.. but u dedicate a paragraph to bring it to vision. you have a photographic writing style. God bless ur parents, and may they always be ur saviour when ur caged and bounded.
Your Battlefield said,
April 9, 2006 @ 5:38 pm
stallion: ;o)
vintage: your visit mean a lot to me, thanks for taking the time and reading my jibberish words, i never would have thought of it that way…me having photographic style…interestin :P, i love creating stories, fictional, and full of emotion i guess that might show through my choice of words….ohh i do LOVE mY parents god bless them and in genral may we all be blessed…merci for these kind words…:D