You Gave Up When I Gave In—Ironic (part one)
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They drove in silence, neither one of them wanting to interrupt each others thoughts or distrub this pleasurable stillness of sound. They provoked each other with these moments that measured their true understanding of each others feelings. Their eyes seemed to project their pleasure and masked the dissatisfaction to merciless ends.
She no longer wanted this adventure to go on anymore; she’s through with this entire chaotic mind swinging feelings that just won’t stop churning. It’s time the ticking stops, the handle freezes and they continue moving their souls on separate paths.
It’s been over for quite awhile, but the void of silence has been the equation to this disillusion. Deception was all she could utter beneath her soft breathe…It was truly the harsh ending to a heart breaking story. The love dies within their bodies as they explore the beginnings of nothing more.
He found the drive taking longer than usual. It was the casual daily routine they took every Friday at dawn. They were more acquainted with each other to understand the silence meant one thing….false endearment and paining love. He longed to find some time alone with her, yet she’s been avoiding their encounter, making up fake excuses to delay. He knew her feelings have yielded nothing more from her part than hurt and throbbing aches.
The windshield was so clear and transparent that their reflections were somewhat a dream. They looked like happiness miserably seeking an end. They looked like beautiful people sharing the happiness of the long stressful days. Yet it was mirror-like but failed in validating the truth of skin and flesh…..
To Be Continued…Or Not 😉
yes, moi is guilty of having free time on her hands, i have nothing to do but make up stories but i have soo much to do…hehehee, i have to write that and research this and redo that and think about Senior Year and crap and apply and such…but i think next week shall be my last holiday then i must get down to business and decide how i want to shape the future because when summer ends, reality will strike and what comes after school will hopefully college unless me dies 😉 anywhooo so i must must strategize and plan….
i bored you yup, so anyways i am looking forward to PORTUGAL vs. ENGLAND i cant wait inshallah it goes as i plan to expect, i want their battle to last over over time, when they can bring in the hott shot players to do some penalty kicks, :)….i know reality is portugal has 85% chance of defeat but come what may i will take it with a big smile hell i am proud they made it thus far……….portugal may god be with you..and make this girl proud :*
Dr. and Found said,
July 1, 2006 @ 10:07 am
that was long and drawn out and i must say not a bad read…idnt read all of it, but i used to write similar stuff till i realized not everyone appreciates…anyway quite interesting!
ZiZoTiMe said,
July 1, 2006 @ 4:07 pm
What?!?!! U wanna Purtogal to win!!? Don’t be in the other side?!
Frank Lampard, Wayne rooney, Steven gerrard and The Great David beckham… All on one team… Sorry to say that but is it the day we’ll make u cry… It’s the revenge day for Euro2004… Get ready for the big defeat enshalah
EnglaaaaaaaaaaaaND… Bring it home 😉
Your Battlefield said,
July 1, 2006 @ 4:09 pm
dr. and found:
welcome to my blog and thanks for being honest, am glad you read some of it and found it interesting…and i really do it for my satisfication, i dont really mind if people dont appreciate it..its a hobby you love it no matter who likes what you do…something personal ;)hope to see you again ;P
Your Battlefield said,
July 1, 2006 @ 4:17 pm
zizotimeL
THIS IS WAR………AND THIS GIRL SEEKS REVENGE…………PORTUGAL shall make me proud even if they dont win…my darlings are AGGRESSIVE WARRIORS i hope they have fouls and such, love those….and
BECKHAM…I TOTALLY HATE, SORRY…i have no idea how he got famous, ROONEY is great, Gerrard is somewhat hot ;), lampard plays good…from england i like ASHELY COLE…
I DONT LIKE BECKHAM
I DONT ENJOY ENGLAND’S TEAM
besides most of portugal’s players play in manchester united, and other teams…so hun we all know the exact techniques and tricks…
I LOVE RONALDO #17 FOR EVER NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS TODAY
PORTUGAL….kick englands bottoms 😉
Wilted_Roze said,
July 1, 2006 @ 6:51 pm
w0o0o0o0w very nice
No3iK said,
July 1, 2006 @ 7:22 pm
batttyyy 🙂
it is very sad, but true.
i love it, u go so deep into details..and i just follow u there.
mashalah girl, plz let there be a part 2.
lol
world cup thingy since arganten e6la3aw, im not cheering for any one anymore… it done 🙁
im gonna watch it though, u know why ;p hehehehehehhe
beckham totally hate him! but he is damn cute.
zizo ;p no comment.
Your Battlefield said,
July 2, 2006 @ 6:24 pm
wilted_roze:
thank you 🙂
no3ik:
i’m glad you liked it, and i love your comments becuz u go deep and find meanings behind it…few do that and i sooo appreciate it 😛 inshallah their is already a part two yet i need to edit and take out some shabby things ;P
hard luck to argentina i wanted them to win yet oh well next world cup ;)…this one i wish will be won by portugal 🙂 and i;m so glad england is out and brasil the competition is lessening and chances of wining are high 😉